Plesse comment a litte. Plus both chapters are a little mature.

Also give me time to write 😭 my exams are near, so in two days or anyday I would be able to write further I will update it immediately. My exam is on 15th Nov and then my sisters marriage prep will start and sfter that my dec exams. So right now because of too much pressure I am unable to write but I hope u will give me sometime. Next update on mon or Tuesday!